I like the light shadow below....but what about a darker green/sparkle along with the white on top..?

i think you are off to a beautiful start! in addition to the mascara on the natural lashes, i would do a hue of green similar to the glitter you used somewhere on the lid and would use a deeper lavender hue for the crease around the outer corner of the eye. you could smooth the lavender into the line of the eyeliner around the outer corner of the eye and even bring it in a little bit along the line of your eyelid, i would suggest about halfway. does that make sense? a kiss of petal pink on the lips would be a perfect finishing touch! isn't makeup fun? :)

Oh, wow! You've really brought your eye contours out well!

I prefer the burgundy lipstick - though it's hard to judge from a screen image.

I think burgundy but the second eye attempt was much better. Just a handy hint that someone pointed out to me is that when you're using liquid eye-liner it's a good idea to work it right in between the lashes so you don't get that strange pale section. You may find that if you take a little extra time working it in on the top it will blend easier and also define your lash line a little better.

looks great, but your eyelashes are still getting lost...

This would be a good look for being up close to your audience, where they can see the delicate shimmering color and lines, but stagelights are going to wash it out completely.

I've found that an excellent test is to stand at least 10 feet away from a mirror (or someone who can give you feedback) and see how that looks. It's surprising how much dark, dramatic makeup you need to wear for it not to simply vanish 10 feet away. The rules are totally different from everyday makeup selection.

You can't go wrong searching YouTube for "smoky eye" or "dramatic eye" and sampling a few tutorials. What you need is deep, BOLD eyeliner, dark lashes, and assertive dramatic color for your lid and crease. It *will* look like way too much makeup when you're in front of the mirror. That's OK.

My last performance, I was really dubious about my super dramatic and deep poison green eye look, but sure enough -- the stagelights washed out practically my whole face EXCEPT my eyes. In the video I have of it, I'm one of only 2 or 3 people who look like they still have eyes.

I struggle with lipstick, but I figure it's always a good plan to try and figure out what color my natural lips are, and then go for a lipstick color that color but much darker. Do you think you could find a paint chip to match your lips? Then you can take the draker colors on the chip to look for lip color.

I highlighted with the same shadow I used on the top. Too much?